this is the poetry written by me in december 2005.. one of my first creations..
This evening i passed a lane
Saw a woman groaning with pain..
she stared up, hoping for aid
but to her , no heed i paid
I felt pity for a short while..
then continued on my way on the aisle..
Later that evening my mind forced me to wonder..
it was the beautiful yet withered face to which i surrender
The face though still groaned with pain
Looked at me still so serene.
I beckoned to her in my thoughts ,
to hear a reply, with her i fought..
Then I hear a murmuring sound
hearing life coming out of her so profound..
As if to distract me the doorbell rang
And through the up i sprang..
The agony stricken face crossed my eyes,
and I concluded life is full whys..
A few days later i saw her again,
beauty still there but no more pain..
her face was as lifeless as it could be,
one of the person responsible was definitely me..
They carried her body through the buzzing street,
and as they passed i touched her feet..
She had become quiet forever....
But the chirpings of the birds never stopped
wind still paved its way with a husking sound,
the dog at the street side continued to bark..
But she was not there
her absence and tranquility still lingering in the air..
Ohh !!! this is LIFE..
So many people come and go..
but does nature ever deviate...??? NO
full of struggles , full of pain..
filled with glories and some gain..
So my dear friends learn to live and strive,
Because you will have it just once - LIFE..!!!!
Ohh !!! this is LIFE..
9 comments:
mast poem hain..inspiration kaha se mila.....
you are becoming adept at taking mundane incidents from daily life and weaving them into beautiful though sometime painful imageries with ur ever-expressive words. Keep them coming! :)
gr8 thought....
waise kaise aaya dimag me itna achha topic... and tera chhupa hua bahut sara talent bahar aa rha hai be is blog me... gud....
kaha se chapa ? well jaaha se bhi chapa is excellent
very nice poetry... n as usual ur vocab :) hmmm ur very carng :P
@raju bhaiyya.. chhapa nhin hai.. originality ki kadar kijiye..n ye bahot pehle ka likha hua hai..2005 :) :)
very nice poem..well arranged excursion..good philosophy used..hard to digest because we all are wondering for amusing stuff not for reality.i'll give 9 out of 10, this poem will abloom my diary..
see these poems.
"Like my heart's pain that has long missed its meaning,
the sun's rays robed in dark
hide themselves under the ground.
Like my heart's pain at love's sudden touch,
they change their veil at the spring's call
and come out in the carnival of colours,
in flowers and leaves."
"Before the end of my journey
may I reach within myself
the one which is the all,
leaving the outer shell
to float away with the drifting multitude
upon the current of chance and change."
by RN Tagore
Thanks,
Manish
You surprize me evry tym i read ur posts.....the thoughts shared actually force the reader to view things frm a diffrnt point of view .....and dez thghts actually are very unique definitely nt d usual type.The best still remains the "Mean World"
KUDOS..........
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